Story part 2?

My dear you are absolutely crazy to post your entire story here. Perhaps you aren't aware the internet is a playground for plagiarists. You story can already be copied dozens and dozens of times. And if you attempt to publish it, no publisher will be interested. It is too much trouble for them to trace back the original ownership. No copyright is any stronger than the bad **** lawyer you hire to protect it. And they cost large amounts of money. I closed my personal website down long ago. I publish nothing online. Not a crumb. My work is well protected and if you want to read it you have to pay for it. Pax- C